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KiNiA
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Wysłany: Czw 04 Maj, 2006 10:11 pm   Krótki tekst w czasie przeszłym-gdyby mógł któś sprawdzić...

Na początek... wiem, że macie dużo tutaj prac do sprawdzania i wiem ze trudno sie z nimi wyrobic ale prosze o szybkie sprawdzenie :) . Od tej pracy dość dużo zależy :] . Z góry bardzo dziękuję. temat to : opisz kogoś z rodziny w czasie przeszlym.


My aunt’s name was Anna and in 1960 she was 25.She has got long dark hair, big blue eyes and small nose. She was beautiful and full of energy woman.
When she was small girl she went to the next village to school and there she met Dawid. Several years later she married him.
In 1961 her family was very small because then she was very young. She and her husband has got 1 child a girl. They lived in very small but pretty village whit few small house.
She was very nice, reasonable and insistent but sometimes solicitous. She always had lots of friend so she never felt alone.
From child she loved music and very often she played the guitar. Sometimes she created the song.
She was dealt whit house and her husband was a doctor. She always helped her husband and other people. She was liked by neighbors.
She was very good cook. She didn't like a cars and motors.
She and Dawid loved horse and they rode very often. Unfortunately, horse was reason of her death. One day she has fallen from horse. Then she was 40 years old.
Ostatnio zmieniony przez KiNiA Pią 05 Maj, 2006 12:38 am, w całości zmieniany 1 raz  
 
 
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Wysłany: Pią 05 Maj, 2006 12:25 am   

No to zacznijmy od tego, że to zdanie na pewno nie jest w czasie przeszłym
KiNiA napisał/a:
She has got long dark hair

KiNiA napisał/a:
was small girl
was a small girl
KiNiA napisał/a:
whit few small house.
with few small houses
KiNiA napisał/a:
From child she loved music
She loved music since she was a child
KiNiA napisał/a:
created the song
created songs
KiNiA napisał/a:
She was very good cook
She was a very good cook
KiNiA napisał/a:
like a cars and motors.
like cars and motors.
KiNiA napisał/a:
loved horse and they rode very often.
loved horses and they rode them very often.
KiNiA napisał/a:
has fallen from horse
had fallen from horse
Cytat:
Then she was 40 years old.
She was then 40 years old.
To jest tyle ile widzę teraz a ponieważ jest po północy więc może przegapiłam coś. Zajrzę tu jeszcze jutro
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KiNiA
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Wysłany: Pią 05 Maj, 2006 12:37 am   

O dziękuję bardzo. Naprawdę jestem bardzo szczęśliwa :D . Now ięc popraiłam to i nawet trochę rozbudowałam. Czy teraz jest dobrze??



My aunt’s name was Anna and in 1960 she was 25.She has got long dark hair, big blue eyes and small nose. She was beautiful and full of energy woman.
Her father was tailor and he has got a farm and few horse.
When she was a small girl she went to the next village to school and there she met Dawid. Several years later she married him.
In 1961 her family was very small because then she was very young. She and her husband has got 1 child a girl. But After few years she borned twins. Then this family was very happy. They lived in very small but pretty village whit few small houses.
She was very nice, reasonable and insistent but sometimes solicitous. She always had lots of friend so she never felt alone.
She loved music since she was a child and very often she played the guitar. Sometimes she created songs.
She was dealt whit house and her husband was a doctor. She always helped her husband and other people. She was liked by neighbors.
She was a very good cook. She didn't like cars and motors.
She and Dawid loved horse and they rode them very often. Unfortunately, horse was reason of her death. One day she had fallen from horse. She was then 40 years old.
Her family was very sad. Particulary her husband because he very loved her. But he knew he must foster children.
 
 
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Wysłany: Pią 05 Maj, 2006 4:56 pm   

KiNiA napisał/a:
She has got long dark hair,
patrz mój poprzedni post
KiNiA napisał/a:
was tailor and he has got a farm and few horse.
was a tailor and he had got a farm and few horses.
KiNiA napisał/a:
husband has got 1 child
husband had got 1 child
KiNiA napisał/a:
She was very nice
She was a very nice
KiNiA napisał/a:
he very loved her
he loved her very much
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Wysłany: Pią 05 Maj, 2006 6:55 pm   

KiNiA napisał/a:
and small nose

> zjadł się przedimek!

KiNiA napisał/a:
She was beautiful and full of energy woman

> tu też

KiNiA napisał/a:
because then she was very young

> (szyk) because she was still very young then

KiNiA napisał/a:
has got 1 child a girl

> (powtórzenie dopełnienia) had one girl (albo: had one child)

KiNiA napisał/a:
But After few years she borned twins

> Few years later (albo: After a few years)
> (zły czasownik: 'borned') spróbuj 'give birth', tylko 'give' koniecznie w czasie przeszłym

KiNiA napisał/a:
in very small but pretty village

> brakuje przedimka

KiNiA napisał/a:
lots of friend

> wielu przyjaciela?

KiNiA napisał/a:
She was dealt whit house

> lepiej po prostu: Była gospodynią domową (dosł. domową żoną :) )

KiNiA napisał/a:
She and Dawid loved horse

> tylko jednego? jeśli tak, to brakowałoby przedimka albo innego określnika

KiNiA napisał/a:
Unfortunately, horse

> brak przedimka

KiNiA napisał/a:
was reason

> brak przedimka

KiNiA napisał/a:
reason of her death

> nie 'of'

KiNiA napisał/a:
from horse

> nie 'from'; brak przedimka

KiNiA napisał/a:
he knew he must

> jak powiedzieć 'must' w czasie przeszłym?

powodzenia!

lucertola

ps.
KiNiA napisał/a:
She was very nice, reasonable and insistent
- tu akurat dobrze bez przedimka, bo nie ma rzeczownika.
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