anglista.edu.pl :: letter to editor

rudzia · Wysłany: Pią 23 Sty, 2009 5:14 pm **letter to editor**

Nie wklejam polecenia, bo wiem, że pod względem formalnym wszystkie punkty są zawarte. Proszę natomiast o sprawdzenie gramtyki i stylu. Thanks.

Dear Editor,

I am writing with regards to your article ‘Middle Age Crisis’, which appeared in this Monday’s edition of you newspaper. I am writing to complain about the way you assessed our venture and to introduce the remarks we have about it.
Firstly, the impression of lack interest your reporter got, is utterly faulty. Many comments reached us considering the matter of a place where vehicles could be left. Unfortunately the space for parking was not sufficient and many prospect visitors were forced to resign from spending time with our society. We reacted promptly and mentioned this problem to administrator. Taking this circumstances into consideration we are convinced that it was the sole reason for a low number of sightseers.
Secondly, the demonstration of archery’s art enjoyed great success particularly among children. I must underline that we are the member if National Association of Historic Societies and we are obliged to meet their safety requirements. This guarantees the security of anyone, who wishes to join our show.
Moreover, dancing performance with live music gained the note, from spectators, of being professional. We also received many flattering opinions on stalls with Middle Age’s crafts, especially preparing traditional dishes and maintaining outfit. I would like to point out here that we have complained to organiser about not adequate space for all our facilities.
I insist on printing correction of the mistaken opinions, which were presented in your newspaper. We look forward to your reaction. You are very welcomed to next year’s event.

Yours faithfully,

majlo · Wysłany: Sob 24 Sty, 2009 12:31 am

This is what I've noticed.

rudzia · Wysłany: Sob 24 Sty, 2009 11:53 am

Well Majlo, thank you, but if it is about

Cytat:

I don't know about the punctuation here.

I'm also hesitating.

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